- A Daemon Danced Naked In The Dell: PART II
BOOK ONE: Enchantments Veil ~ Chapter One continued… Here at the fringe of the city that had over the decades enveloped Greenhaven, beneath the whispering leaves, Jodee’s cabin stood as a solitary sentinel on the shores of a lake that mirrored the sky’s burgeoning light. Around her, the forest hummed with a quiet intensity, its heart beating in sync with the natural world yet thrumming …
- A Rant About Why I’m Doing What I’m Doing
In my deepest, most ancient memory of me, I am sitting in this magical spot that once used to exist at The Homestead where I grew up. There was once this old barn, and this little place had once been an old shed just off the barn. Drive shed, tool shed, who knows. But now it was just the ruin of the foundation blocks/cement (whatever), …
- A Daemon Danced Naked In The Dell
BOOK ONE: Enchantments Veil ~ Chapter One: PART I The sun rose over the tops of the trees, casting a cold morning light on the cabin nestled on the shores of a serene lake. The cedar trees that encircled the cabin swayed gently in the breeze, providing a welcome distraction from the lingering nightmares that had slipped out of bed with her. Jodee took a …
I love your poem. I wonder if you need the apostrophe in ply’s, though? If you mean it to be a shortened version of supplies I think maybe “plies” might work. The apostrophe to me implies a sense of possession, and maybe it is just me but that doesn’t seem to fit what I thought you were trying to convey. I also wonder if “then” would be a better word than “than” in “twinkling energy then gone” — of course word choice is personal in poetry and maybe I’m not catching the drift. Your words and thoughts are lovely. Thank you for sharing them!
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:) suggest away…and you’re right…plies works better. And I am always getting than and then mixed up.
And thank you…poetry is a personal thing, but spelling errors are spelling errors ;-)
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Beautiful!
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